QUOTE (Ogawa @ Mar 27 2010, 12:29 PM)

The Gunslinger.
by Stephen King.
This is a book with sentences like, "My father had by then taken control of his ka-tet, you must ken--the Tet of the Gun--and was on the verge of becoming Dinh of Gilead, if not all In-World." Which is fine. I can dig fantasy of this sort, but so much of the book just comes off kind of awkward, with lots of forced metaphors and similes and attempts to infuse each sentence with import, like King is trying to be Cormac McCarthy or H.P. Lovecraft. One gets the feeling this sort of writing doesn't come naturally to King.
However, I more or less dig the world he's created here and I'd imagine the other books in the series are better. Don't know when I'll feel like reading them, though.
Also, sperm isn't just sperm, it's "mansperm." For whatever reason.
Yeah, the later books are better, definitely. The closer King hews to the prose of
Firestarter and
The Stand, where he balances conversational banality with what often looks alarmingly like literature, the better. As the series goes on, he figures out how to reduce the self conscious awkwardness of "mansperm, which is just bad writing, even if he means better.
The funny thing is, King loves this book, and the series it became,
because of the prose. He discusses it at length somewhere, I think maybe
On Writing.
"The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed."
King thinks this is the best first sentence he's ever written. He says it tells you everything you'll ever need to know about the story, and it's just good writing. I think he's right: No matter how long and bizarre and often bloated, the entirety of it is contained in those words. That's
always what
The Dark Tower series is about. And as writing it's stark and spare, a whole narrative in 12 words. As beautiful as anything Hemingway or Fitzgerald ever penned.
Unfortunately, King doesn't wander back to writing that clear and concise again for a long time. Seven or eight volumes. For me, it was all worthwhile, but I'm a fan so I forgive a lot. I can't imagine why a casual King reader would commit to such an undertaking, even if it's all enjoyable.